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Pain and Panic
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:18:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There are days when I can only cry,
I can only scream
I can only bleed.
These days feel like theyll never end.
Ill hurt until I scream,
Ill scream until I cry,
Ill cry until I bleed
And Ill bleed until I die.
My head is full of hate and pain,
Its full of thoughts of you.
My thoughts are of my own demise,
The only way to make this stop.
I will make it out alive,
Pain and panic will be gone.
And I will be here no more.
Copyright ©
surge_joebot
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2004-10-26 14:18:42]
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Re: Pain and Panic
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:24:38 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. Intense and emotional |
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Re: Pain and Panic
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:34:32 PM AEST
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i've felt this way so many times before....i know it all too well...great write...excellent job...
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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Re: Pain and Panic
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:30:16 PM AEST
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It's a good poem.
Very simple and honest.
--Mothy |
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