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Dominated
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:46:18 PM in AEST
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She doesn't know where she is anymore
No more contemplation
Her days spent staring at the stars
She's given into temptation
She parts her pretty pink lips
Not a sound does she emit
And bites down on them hard
Stifling screams she won't admit
She searches the life inside of his eyes
Redemption there shell find
Within his chains and razors love:
The leather ties that bind
Copyright ©
_Raspberry_
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2004-10-26 15:46:18]
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Re: Dominated
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:24:28 PM AEST
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Wow! This is really good.
Blu |
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Re: Dominated
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:38:34 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done. |
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Re: Dominated
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by serena on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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| grew to ***** like your writing, oblivious . |
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Re: Dominated
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:52:06 PM AEST
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i liked it....great job..
Lots of Love
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Re: Dominated
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:14:08 AM AEST
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very good write, liked it alot,
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