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Candles
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 06:20:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Candles...
As the wick
Now alight
Plays with a dancing flame
Everything seems so bright
Even though, just outside,
Day has turned to night
Candles...
No the wax
Melting slow
Makes beneath a silky pool
A pool of support that will grow
As if, in melting, the wax
Now holds secrets no one will know
Candles...
And now the end
All is gone
The wax, the wick
Joy for which we long
The warmth, love, and care
And I just can't be strong
Candles...
Well, I guess
You have to see
I wasn't talking about candles
I was talking about you and me
About our dying friendship
Through this analogy
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
... [
2004-10-26 18:20:05]
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Re: Candles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 06:35:36 PM AEST
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| wow, just wow. *is speachless* |
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