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dad
Contributed by
TornApart
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:05:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Loneliness is all i feel
The way you left me dad was unreal
Cried myself to sleep each night
Wishing you could be there to hold me tight..
Longing to hear ur laugh,i will never again hear
This is what filled me with so much fear!
Only hurt and tears were left behind...
Hardly any memories in my mind!
Can no longer remember your face.....
Or the warmth of ur embrace..
Life is empty.....Life is sad!
I think ill just end it like you did dad !!!!!!!!!!
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Re: dad
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:32:42 PM AEST
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Hey that's a very touching poem, I'm sorry for you're dads lost, but ending you're life will only tear you're loved one. Like you're mom family members be strong god makes people do things sometimes that they just can't help. Maybe you're dad had a reason to end his life. Do you? Be strong is all i can say
IM REALLY SORRY |
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Re: dad
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:01:34 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was very good
I could feel your pain from these words,
very deep and emotional
My heart goes out to you
Please hang in there!!!!!!
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Re: dad
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by emocutie07 on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:28:09 PM AEST
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| Im so sorry,...it was a very strong emotional write and your words sliced at my heart..If you ever need to talk Im here for ya hang in there hun...stay strong, and I'll be praying for you and your family |
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Re: dad
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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I feel like i should say something touching and sympathetic, but sympathy gets old. So all i will say is that the words you have written really portray how you feel. It is an awesome talent to have. use it to help you get through these tough times you are facing.
You are a great writer, keep it up and you will go far. |
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