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DaRkness
Contributed by
Dark_angel_babay
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My life fades into a never ending darkness,
Nothing matters,
I am dead inside,
No more tears,
No more pain,
Only emptiness to engulf my soul,
You took what little I had,
And ripped it to pieces,
You broke my glass heart,
And now you make my wrists run blood,
So be happy,
You won,
I am gone,
And you get what you want again.
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Dark_angel_babay
... [
2002-11-18 01:30:00]
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Re: DaRkness
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by darkeyedman on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 09:55:57 PM AEST
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| i liked your poem. full of the hopelessness of youth and love unrequited (god, i need spellcheck). it made me smile, not because it wasn't sad, but because it reminded me of a time when i was much younger. since you invoked memories with your words, the poem must be good. jim |
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Re: DaRkness
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by thorns on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:12:27 PM AEST
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| i've felt that way, though for different reasons. |
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