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Drunkin Love
Contributed by
Sinn
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:49:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You've broke my heart
since the start
although I know what you been through
you can count I'll be there for you
If you would just give me the chance
to prove to you
I'll forever stand by you
For now I shall drown my sarrow
more beer will come with tomarrow
I try to wipe away the tears
but to you all i can say is cheers
Most of the time I laugh and play
but for you I cry today
for a while now
my life will be hell
until' i can prove myself to mel
If you still question now
than hear me this
i'll drain that keg
For just one kiss
Copyright ©
Sinn
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2004-10-27 08:49:25]
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Re: Drunkin Love
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:56:00 AM AEST
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a very sad write, I myself use alcohol to take away my pain, have done for years and all it brings is more pain, nearly lost me my relationship,
pixie xx |
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Re: Drunkin Love
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by Nixzy on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:03:28 AM AEST
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That situation happens alot around my area. I know how you feel. I really do. Brilliant poem i really liked it.
*Nixzy* |
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Re: Drunkin Love
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by Crash on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:04:36 PM AEST
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| That mel, she never really did learn my man, bu she wsn't worth it to begin with. You write good stuff stevo, and I hope sooner or later you'll write more |
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