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Swalled In Darkness
Contributed by
skyblumoon
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 02:36:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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"Swallowed in Darkness"
I'm engulfed in anger.
Self-reliance is what I depend on.
I wear bitterness like a blouse.
My face is a mask of hardness where no beauty can be found.
I'm empty there is no soul with-in.
I'm utterly swallowed in darkness.
Life has been cruel to me.
Fate pours salt on my open wounds.
Guilt is a seven-course meal I eat five times a day.
Remorse is my companion.
Love is an illusion a child's fairy tale.
I'm utterly swallowed in darkness.
"What made me this way" you ask?
The answer comes too easy.
Like soft butter on hot toast.
ABUSE!
LOSING TOO MUCH!
HEARTACHES!
I'm utterly swallowed in darkness
Copyright ©
skyblumoon
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2004-10-27 14:36:48]
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Re: Swalled In Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:00:05 PM AEST
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| A painful yet such a beautiful poem.... Truly a masterpiece. |
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Re: Swalled In Darkness
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 05:30:34 PM AEST
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Blu...
Yes... this is a true masterpiece... u certainly wrote ur feelings and expressed them very well...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Swalled In Darkness
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by philophine on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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LIke liquid wax on a surface wound , these are the days of our oops. its painfull i really like it. short and not sweet .
NP |
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