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decievence
Contributed by
bulldogg
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 02:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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caught up in this hell hole
i beg for dear life
i scream and yell but no one in sight
please help me god get out of this place
i dont know waht to do
im standing in place
looking around where can i go
what can i do
im in this place because of you
i know your bad
but i still keep coming
who are you to me
your not **** not nothing
still holding for dear life
dont know what to do
the room is spinning
and i fall on the floor
i only did it cuz my life was a bore
and my only way out is to find the door
Copyright ©
bulldogg
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2004-10-27 14:40:33]
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Re: decievence
(User Rating: 1 )
by billi on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:15:25 PM AEST
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| I think this is a pretty gud poem. You are a good writer. If you get a chance, take a look at some of mine . Keep up the awesome work! |
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