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Humanitys Loss
Contributed by
TwEek
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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lost, blind
in this fog of depression
cutting me off from humanity
stealing away my dreams
black shards of regret
slice through this bare mind
insanity laughs
death grins
scaring my inner shell
empty and cold
as suicides bullets
rip through my skin
Copyright ©
TwEek
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2004-10-27 16:37:42]
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Re: Humanitys Loss
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:35:36 PM AEST
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| good write. kind of inconsistent with the rhymes though. =/ this was very interesting and vivid. keep up the great writes. |
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