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Beg God This Be My Last Day
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:05:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My bloody tears fill my eyes,
dropping from my lashes,
because of stinging pain and
the hopelessness in all my desperate gashes.
I sleep away
the pain each day.
I slash and cut,
I'm in a rut.
I die each day,
so soon to fade.
Each breath I've cursed,
my heart to burst,
if not collapse, so hollow.
I burn inside,
no place to hide,
in rage and eternal anguish.
My mind attacked,
I'm soon to crack,
beg God to make this my last day.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-10-27 20:05:07]
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Re: Beg God This Be My Last Day
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by surge_joebot on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:04:34 PM AEST
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That was a really really good poem, so sad and so brutely but simple to the point and so relative to a lot of people i guess... good stuff :D
cheers
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Re: Beg God This Be My Last Day
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:21:25 PM AEST
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| excellent write. you wrote this very well. you are very good at this style as you are at your regular one. |
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