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Is There Hope?
Contributed by
jade01
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She laid there in the bathtub
water pouring down her skin.
From her head to her limbs,
she had chills every now and then.
She felt worthless, she felt pain
she couldn't get back up on her own
two feet again.
Bruises all over her body,
marks on her wrists
She wanted to enter eternal bliss.
To forget all the pain,
hoping he would never hurt her again.
To leave her in peace, where she lay
And pray, and pray for a better day.
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2004-10-27 20:45:04]
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Re: Is There Hope?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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wow you can feel the pain in this poem.. i have felt this way before a while ago .. this is a good expression on that .. good work!!
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Is There Hope?
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very emotional and powerful. written very well. |
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