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DEAD
Contributed by
runaway0516
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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NOTHING CAN STOP THE PAIN I FELL
IM STARTING TO THINK THAT NOTHING IS REAL
IM GONNA DIE SOON ANYWAY
WHY WAIT ANOTHER DAY
I HATE THESE PEOPLE AND THE LIFE I LIVE
IM REALLY TO START NOT GIVE
A DAMN ABOUT WHAT THESE PEOPLE THINK
ME AND SANITY, THERES JUST NO LINK
NO ONE UNDERSTANDS THE WAY I AM
THATS WHY I JUST DONT GIVE A DAMN
PLEASE SOMEONE HELP ME, IM DYING INSIDE
MY SOUL IS GONE AND NOW IT HAS DIED
IT IS FAR TOO LATE TO SAVE A PERSON LIKE ME
IM ALREADY DEAD AS YOU CAN SEE
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runaway0516
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2004-10-27 21:43:08]
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Re: DEAD
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:55:00 PM AEST
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| excellent write. nice rhymes and flow. you may be too far to be saved, but you are not too far to rise. |
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Re: DEAD
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:44:30 AM AEST
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Very sad but very well said.
I can relate as I've had these emotions before but as long as there's breath there is hope.
U r as importent as any of us on this planet.
I care and don't even know u.
U can p.m. me any time.
Hang tuff, this too soon shall pass.
Jus reach in your heart and know that u r some body 'cause God don't make no junk.
Luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: DEAD
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:23:09 AM AEST
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very painful write, great rhymes, just a suggestion, maybe try using lower case letters next time, as the poem is being shouted at everyone, other than that it was fine,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: DEAD
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:33:52 AM AEST
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i love your poem, it flows and rymes nicely. But like emy said there is still hope even you, so dont give up.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: DEAD
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by Hollie85 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:34:28 AM AEST
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| Don't dwell on the feelings, expressed excellently. |
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Re: DEAD
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by Swtpea92 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:45:08 PM AEST
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| that was amazing and like.i dunno what to say, and i feel horriable that u feel like this.... |
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Re: DEAD
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by anonymussme on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:02:25 PM AEST
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| i hate that you feel this way and i hope i can help, this although not on a happy subject is an awsome poem |
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