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Perfect
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cannot be who you i am not
It seems like i'm just a dot,
In this world
Because no one understands
me,
And no one knows what it feels
Like to have someone make fun of you in everyway
I wish it would stop day after day,
No one knows what it feels like to be me
Sometimes i wish i could just flee,
And just runaway from all the pain
But no matter where i go,
It always seems to find me
Why won't you let me be,
I guess i didn't turn out like you'd hope
It's been so hard for me to cope,
Sometimes i don't know what i do wrong
I was only trying to help,
But no matter what i do its never good enough for you,
Sometimes your answers aren't clear
I wish i could find a way to disappear
Just so i could get away from here,
I guess the reason you yell at me,
Is because you won't me to be you
But you know thats its not coming true,
You can't stand who i am
But you know you can't change me,
You know thats true
I guess thats why you alwas make me feel soblue,
I tried to make you proud
I really did
But it was hard on a little kid,
I had to change in every way
I know my life will never be the same,
I had to grow up so fast
I never knew life was a blast,
Why did you leave mom?
You could've waited til things got calm,
I can't believe what you did,
I felt so alone
With you never home,
I guess i'm not what you hoped
And not what you pictured in your dreams
I think i know what this life means,
I know i'm not perfect,
But i tried my hardest to be
believe me,
But all i want to do is be me.
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happybunnyfan
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2004-10-28 00:25:03]
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Re: Perfect
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:36:00 AM AEST
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Wow u did a great job writing your feelings and venting.
This is very sad but it's a great write.
A masterpeice of what so many children have ti endure in life.
Hang tuff, freid.
U r a ver talented writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Perfect
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this it showed alot of emotional feeling's that almost every kid {not all but some} has been through at one point in their lifes with their parents. Well written great job
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Re: Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:38:58 PM AEST
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| sounds a bit too familar to me. |
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