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Trapped Soul
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:46:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm hurting you more everyday
By not knowing what i want
or what to say
I don't expect you to understand me
I dont' even understand me
Just stop asking what's wrong
Cuz I know no answer
To this ever daunthing question
Just let me hide away
In my darkened mind
The pain will keep me company
and the hate will keep me sain
I will always paint a smile on my face
everytime I see you in this place
but that's all I can promise
I can't fake too much
even for you
I wish I knew
the right words to say
My heart is bleeding and the tears fall
but the tears are not tears at all
but rather anger and frustion seeping through my burning eyes
I'm sick of telling all my lies
Nothing is good or even fine
I just don't know
where to draw the line
between sad and insantiy
The clock is ticking and I continue to plee
I only wish to be free
of all the hurt
and wasted years
All the words left unsaid
Get this madness out of my head
Find my heart in the frozen dark place
Where it once was
Help me tear down these walls I built so long ago
So you can see the real me
and love me still
and I can finally admit
I love you
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dirtyfool
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2004-10-28 07:46:26]
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Re: Trapped Soul
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:49:06 AM AEST
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awww this is sad, it can be hard finally letting someone in, once you have built those walls around yourself it can be almost impossible to break them down, but build your trust and the walls will slowly come down, I hope that you can be happy one day *hugs*
takecare
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Re: Trapped Soul
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:06:51 AM AEST
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| I know what you are feeling, I am have been there before, it is hard trying to find strength to let someone into your the space you have built around you, I hope oneday you will succeed in finding a way to trust again, nad let the love back in. awesome poem, vivid about your feelings, detailed write, showing alot of courage. |
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Re: Trapped Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:27:04 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem, i really did enjoy this.
Hugs,
Jane |
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