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Better Off Without Me
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You would be better off without me
Don't bother asking
You know it's the truth
For all the times I screwed up
For all the times I lied to you
You deserve someone better
That someone better I understand is your friend
I'm sure she'd make you happier than I would
Our love was doomed from the very beginning
I want to give up so badly
But something keeps holding me back
It's lust...& lust is a terrible thing
I've grown tired to trying
It's getting me no where
Why should I bother to continue
I know you know this is about you
It's pretty damned obvious
You know you'd be better off with out me
*Cries*
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
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2004-10-28 09:02:33]
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Re: Better Off Without Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:05:13 AM AEST
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can feel your hurt in this one *hugs* dont give up, all your fighting and trying will be worth it in the end,
takecare
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Re: Better Off Without Me
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:28:03 AM AEST
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| Ditto to everything pixie just said. |
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Re: Better Off Without Me
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:28:49 AM AEST
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| It's amazing how poetry can be a healer of hurts and pain. It's a place to vent your feelings - I definately can feel the pain you are feeling. Good Luck, life does get better. |
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Re: Better Off Without Me
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:26:53 AM AEST
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Lust is a terrible thing. Hang in there. Better things can happen very quickly.
Stitch |
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