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Bad Day
Contributed by
Saz
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:27:13 AM in AEST
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As I sit here in this room,
I feel I'm falling to my doom!
Last night I fell down the stairs,
I slipped and fell unawares!
Although I'm still rather sore,
I try not to think of it, anymore.
Although I love art, I do, I do,
Not even that will help me through!
This morning my mum thought she'd look,
In my little Harry Potter book.
'I'm on a diet' she did discover,
She was surprised, yes, my own mother!
'Why oh why' is what she said,
But I just sat there on my bed.
'Why not' is all that I could say,
I wish she hadn't found out that way!
To lie, was not my intention,
I hope she didn't get the wrong impression.
And all my brother stood and did,
Was laugh at me, the stupid flid!
Copyright ©
Saz
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2004-10-28 11:27:13]
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Re: Bad Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:57:50 PM AEST
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| This was funny and tragic a rare combination. the final word was great it tied the whole rhyming structure of the poem together, Thanks for sharing and well written |
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Re: Bad Day
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by Red_October on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:24:38 PM AEST
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| This is definitely a good poem...tragically funny as the last commentor wrote. Let the ink flow! (Red_October) |
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