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For the Last Time
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For the last time, I have cried over you, Not loving me, The way that I love you, For the last time, I will bleed, On your behalf, Too many times, Have you hurt me, I'm through, For the last time, Shall I wait for a call, In the middle of the night, To hear your voice, Tell me the words, That I wanna hear, That mean nothing to you, But the world to me, For the first time, I will be free, Not bound, To what could have been, For the first time, I can love another, But it wont be, What I wished, You had with me, For the first time, I will tell you, Good bye!
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Re: For the Last Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:18:23 PM AEST (User
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it will take immense strength for you to say your goodbyes, but you deserve to be allowed to move on and be happy with another *hugs*
powerul words,
pixie xx |
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Re: For the Last Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:06:01 PM AEST (User
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I like the conviction in your words. Nice write! Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: For the Last Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovesucks on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:10:07 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this keep writing, excellent work |
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Re: For the Last Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST (User
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Your poems is bittersweet yet lovely, exposing the emotions of a lost love. |
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