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Treasure of Art
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 01:55:23 PM in AEST
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Tangled,
Ever so slightly,
Lightly
Chills devour my skin
and bite me.
Masterpiece of sin,
Bodies hot
(from within)
Painted in the Mad Garden
with watercolors and dandelions.
My art is treasure
brought to life with heart,
Strangled in fever,
Intoxicated with sweat and a cold soul
that has neither
(life or art)
Yet we stand apart
Divided by careful miles
of worthless smiles
And clear drop emotion
drowned by the waves of this
tear-filled ocean.
Lacking much more than heart,
We fight for recognition
in life through art.
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2004-10-28 13:55:23]
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Re: Treasure of Art
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:00:02 PM AEST
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wow, that was an amazing write, where did you spring from hehe :)
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Re: Treasure of Art
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:26:27 AM AEST
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Introspective.
I'm not so sure about the logic here - you negate the positive of the heart with a 'cold' soul, devoid of both life and art. This is confusing me somewhat - doesn't the soul possess all these characteristics? Or is that just my opinion?
Heh. whatever it is, I appreciate the effort.
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Re: Treasure of Art
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by newbabel on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:39:39 PM AEST
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| Painted in the Mad Garden
with watercolors and dandelions.
I loved these lines. You've got some brilliant stuff in here.
F. |
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Re: Treasure of Art
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:55:50 AM AEST
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| beautifully, beautifully written |
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Re: Treasure of Art
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:37:02 PM AEST
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| Your creativity it so vast.... Beautiful poem... |
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