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Vision
Contributed by
xpussyxsugarx
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:45:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Vision of beauty before my eyes
It kills me every time
What used to be mine
I had it all and I let it all go
Brand new kisses
Come with brand new lies
Heartbreak creates destruction
Every * time
A way to survive
Is to feel the pain
Let it burn inside
And bleed from your eyes..
Copyright ©
xpussyxsugarx
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2004-10-28 15:45:31]
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Re: Vision
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:59:23 PM AEST
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a good write, a more gentle dark write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Vision
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:41:47 PM AEST
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I have my own rewrites to
annoy me.
This is good...
...and love your name.
--Mothy |
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Re: Vision
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:25:13 PM AEST
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i know this feeling so well...great write....i like it alot...awesome job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Vision
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by secretwind on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 05:03:44 AM AEST
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| Nice flow.... |
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