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Tragic Love
Contributed by
Renstar
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:47:56 PM in AEST
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Tragic Love
For all the times you lied
a scare appeared on my heart
For all the times you said it wouldnt happen again
you were tearing me apart
For every fist that landed upon my face
i told myself i would leave this place
For all the times i tried to die
For all these times i say GOODBYE!
Ren*
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Renstar
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2004-10-28 15:47:56]
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Re: Tragic Love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:00:38 PM AEST
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*hugs* its good to see that you can now write about your terrible ordeals, i hope you can live your life now with no more fear and find some love, which you so rightly deserve,
pained write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:05:49 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling. It's hard to understand how it's easier to kill ones self than to leave or get a divorce..but domestic violence takes you so low..that ..well I understand exactly. Good write. |
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