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SOME HEARTS
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A teardrop falls,
Shattering on the ground.
A lonely heart calls,
But no one hears a sound.
Me myself,
And all alone.
With no answer,
On the phone.
Some hearts broken,
Will never mend.
And some hearts,
Will never bend.
Some hearts,
Will forever ache.
And some hearts,
Will surely break.
You were the summer,
Hot in my heart.
You were the thaw,
Breaking the ice apart.
Now it's winter,
In my soul.
An' where my heart was,
There is now a hole.
You stole my heart,
Off a silver tray.
You let me love you,
Then ran away.
I can forgive you,
For what you've done.
But I won't forget you,
If I live to a hundred an' one.
Copyright 1993 by Alexander McDonald
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Re: SOME HEARTS
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:04:20 AM AEST
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Alex, this is so beautiful.... sad but so lovely..
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Re: SOME HEARTS
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:17:04 AM AEST
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Bravo!!! This is absolutely beautiful
there are so many ways you have
expressed different ways that hearts
handle things. It gave me a beautiful
vision..Thank you for sharing your poetry
I think it's beautiful and look forward to
reading more of your work
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Re: SOME HEARTS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 12:55:16 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comments. I've been away from the site.. Didn't know that there was a new one.
Been trying to write a fantasy adventure novel. We'll see...
Alex. |
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Re: SOME HEARTS
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:39:33 PM AEST
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| lovely work ;*). |
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Re: SOME HEARTS
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:20:55 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem it was very touching. |
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