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Looking through my window
Contributed by
Nixzy
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Looking out of the window out into the sky,
The clouds are dark and my life is a lie.
The greyness and the cold are bound around my heart,
Leaving my last breath with you while we are apart.
I look into your eyes and all i see is black,
The hatred,
The evil,
Nothing.
You are empty just like me,
And only i can see,
We love each other too much to cope.
So while the time passes and we are no more,
Ill look out my window and walk through that door.
Copyright ©
Nixzy
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2004-10-28 17:25:58]
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Re: Looking through my window
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:27:28 PM AEST
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A well written little poem.
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Re: Looking through my window
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Looking through my window
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by Dawny on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:05:28 AM AEST
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wow, this is so sad and emotional..you can really feel the pain.
Excellent poem, I love it
Love Dawny x |
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