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Mommy where are you???
Contributed by
LIving_In_My_Dream
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:03:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mommy where are you? please come home why is daddy so sad? is it cus hes alone?
mommy we miss you why did you leave? we want you back don't you believe?
mommy at night i hear daddy cry then i go in his room and ask him why
he says cus you left and he misses you and without you by him he doesn't know what to do
mommy I'm sorry for whatever i did i try my best to be a good kid
I'm sorry i was born but it wasn't my choice and now i would die to hear your voice
i don't understand why you left us here daddy says you didn't want to and that i should hold you near
he told me it wants your fault that you were taken against your will by a very evil man who likes to kill
he said you fought hard to stay here on earth but no matter what you tried it didn't work
this man killed you slowly hurt you more each day until daddy cried and told my you'd gone away
he didn't tell me where you went thats why i write this note cus maybe someone else will find you and know where its supposed to go
this will be my third letter why don't you ever reply? mommy don't you love us? do you like to watch us cry?
mommy i still love you and i know daddy does too and even if don't write back i wont give up on you
I'll write a letter every week and ask daddy why you died ill stay confused when the mailman sees my letter and starts to cry
i ask him where to send it when its a new week and i write again I'm not sure what the numbers are but i know it ends with heaven
i decided to ask daddy the name of the evil man he didn't want to say anything but i said "please tell me if you can"
finally he decided that it was time to answer with sadness in his eyes he said the mans name is cancer
Even though I'm only 5 i went to the police "a man named cancer killed my mommy can you help me find him please?"
"i want to look at him and stare into his eyes i want him to know my pain and know that daddy still cries"
a nice lady said they cant find him that they've tried many times so i said id ask you in my letter and that if they couldn't, that was fine
so mommy where is he? please tell me, so i can say "mister, i forgive you for taking my mommy away"
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Re: Mommy where are you???
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:12:24 PM AEST (User
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good write sure touched me |
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Re: Mommy where are you???
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:41:59 AM AEST (User
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excellent write dani. a heart breaker. |
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