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Between the lines
Contributed by
R0me0
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you look between these lines,
You'll see the word that most don't find.
If you know of that I wish to share,
You'll see that between these lines is often there.
If you see that which within my heart swells,
You'll find that within your heart it also dwells,
If you find its not there to see,
Between these lines I'll share it with thee.
That the love of which I speak to you,
Has no walls of which its limited to.
Copyright ©
R0me0
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2004-10-28 18:13:21]
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Re: Between the lines
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:16:21 PM AEST
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no, I thought it was a good poem and you put a lot of heart into it...I enjoyed the read very powerful and it gets the message through if you aren't stupid...But anywho I think you did a great job...
read and comment some of mine if you want...
much love,
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Re: Between the lines
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:53:01 AM AEST
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Good poem.. Put alot of thought and emotions into it... Great job..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Between the lines
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by peggyjay on
Sunday, 24th February 2013 @ 10:03:54 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem a lot. I liked the rhyme you used and how it all went together smoothly. |
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