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CarlyJane
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Young and beautiful
Eyes so deep
Like the deepest seas
Eyes so blue
Like the wonderful skies above
Young and carefree
She has so much love
Yet she's so small
Small hands and feet
Smooth and soft
Maybe when I'm old
She'll be there to care for me
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Re: CarlyJane
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:01:53 PM AEST
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aww aint that cute,ur neice sounds so cute,i liked this,u shouldnt doubt urself when it comes to poetry being good or not,bc i've read some of ur stuff and its great and full of humanity power,take care,keep'em comen
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