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A Seal Of Fate
Contributed by
screwup
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:29:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I need a family, need a home
Just a place I don't feel so alone
It's just love that I need
And a knife so I can bleed
16 years old and I wanna die
Too many times I've tried suicide
So many bruises over the years
Only a blade to calm my fears
Abuse tears you apart, heart and soul
Because where it was there is a hole
My back used to be all black and blue
There was only so much cutting could do
Even the blood couldn't mend it all
And all the horrors that I saw
Or the fire of a rapist's hands
No clue to me there was such a man
I tried to kick, and run away
Nothing worked, made to stay
46 cuts, no looking back
Blood running down, that's a fact
Does anyone know the pain I feel
To take a pack of razorblades and break the seal
Nothing was supposed to hurt like this
When I die will I be missed
The ultimate question I'll never find out
As I seal my fate without a doubt
Copyright ©
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2004-10-28 20:29:13]
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:34:54 PM AEST
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| Pretty good write for a screw up which i dont think u are.. i feel the pain just in a different way good write tho :-) |
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:00:48 PM AEST
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| excellent write. well written with the emotion and power. |
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:06:05 PM AEST
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So much feeling, it broke my heart, didnt think my heart fracture anymore, I know how you feelin some ways but in others I can noly imagine, being a male I know nothing of what rape is, but I can relate to blades and pain, anger and external abuse, but death, if you wonder who will miss you, I will, I see a beautiful mind body and soul, I see you, if you ever wanna talk you know where I am, this poem was so heart wrenching, so many vivid images, beautifully written and with heartfelt agony. Being so far away all I can offer is an ear to listen, and a virtual shoulder.....peace be with you, take care always
Your friend
Karl |
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by Swtpea92 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:29:19 PM AEST
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i can relate to that so well, except i am not 16. lol. so i think that, that is a reat poem and i am sorry you feel so.
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:50:50 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. not bad of a write. keep on writing and i hope you get better |
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Re: A Seal Of Fate
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:05:07 AM AEST
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That is so good, very powerful, emotional, purely from the heart.
Is everything going alright?
If you're like me, I only write depressing poetry when I'm feeling bad, unless it's one of those annoying request poems lol
So again, great write.
Take care though.
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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