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dont even try me
Contributed by
Stonedweed_420
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I luv him wit all my heart
I wood never let this fall apart
I wood do anything 4 him
Hes my world my everything
I cnt imagine it without him there
I would b so bare I luv him Do u care
No u dnt u want 2tear us apart.
Rip us 2 shreds.Cut out my hart
ill mess ur world up Then waz up?
Dnt even try me ull B wishin
that wen im done wit u ull b able
2walk But I hate 2tell u ull be
in shock Ill mess ur world up Dnt even
try me im ur worst nitemare ull B gaspin
4 air Look me in the eyes When ur
talkin 2me I wnt u 2Cme 2trust
me 2luv me Like I luved him Dnt
mess witme chick u wont B able 2
count 2 10
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2004-10-28 22:45:02]
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Re: dont even try me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:55:43 PM AEST
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| great write. i cant say that i like the shortcuts in typing because it makes it hard to read sometimes. has a rap quality tone to it, pretty good in that manner. i dont think you should worry about others tearing you apart, when you and whoever you are with can do it just as well without help. jealously and possessiveness can sometimes lead to a break up just as easily as anything else. |
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Re: dont even try me
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by Apardame on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:37:25 AM AEST
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| Great Write!!! |
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