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I hateI love
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:36:14 AM in AEST
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i hate the way you say hi
i hate the way you say good-bye
i hate the way you lie
i hate the way you make me cry
i love the way you stay away
i love the way you say good-bye
i love the way you dont stay
i love the way you call her babe
i hate you
i love the way you hate me
i hate you when you're not true
i love the way you leave
i'm standing up to the pain
all alone
i'm dancing through the rain
all alone
all i want is the truth
you wont tell me cuz you're a coward
and you think i'm a retard
all i want is the truth
i hate the way you make me smile everyday
i love the way you protect me from the lightening
i love the way you love me
i love the way i love you
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Re: I hateI love
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:57:22 AM AEST
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| some of this reminded me of avril. fantastic write. |
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Re: I hateI love
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by cheech on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:30:39 AM AEST
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aww sorry about ur loss,u really liked him,but he want good enough for u he treated u like garbage u'll find someone else i promise,this was good i really enjoyed it
love always cheech |
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Re: I hateI love
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by surge_joebot on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:17:55 AM AEST
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that was really good, it has really good contrast and good personal touch. i liked it :D but at the same time it means a bad thing, so yeah sorry bout that lol
cheers
demelza |
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Re: I hateI love
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by booboo on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:25:16 AM AEST
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wow if u hate so much about 1 then y dont u just get rid of them?meh what can ya do this was a great poem i enjoyed it muchly and my heart goes out to u,i hope u find another 1 out there,theres plenty out there,and i bet you're 1 of them pretty looken innoscent once but are really naughty,LOL,that was a joke dont take it seriously i just wanted to make ya laugh,i hope i did in fact,nicely done keepen rollen in
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Re: I hateI love
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:46:05 AM AEST
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Aw :( Sorry to hear that about you & your bf.
Great poem though. |
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Re: I hateI love
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by lilracer37 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:05:34 PM AEST
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| Im sorry to hear about ur bf, mine broke up with me a few days ago too. But the good side is ur poetry is very good, keep writing ur an awesome writer a whole lot better then me. |
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Re: I hateI love
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:35:38 PM AEST
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| good one homie gives a new meaning to hate but loveing is ok hard to do again but yea look in diff places maybe u'll find another :-) |
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