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approached
Contributed by
improvnoise
on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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approached,
arranged haze:
in the distance...
groan is a daze:
yet the dark cloud meshes the pleasure of words
machine's sound
monotonously, it revokes a misread dead
misconception
conception,
bored wrinkles
do not snare
they do not
when you listen to the void
yawning is
tranced
are we?
matrix array maze
you and me are grazed
the significance of a well in the desert of H-division
means nothing
you turn around and see no one.
is it dead over there?
sublime:
patterned;
underneath the moan, dots of purple tinkles sacrifice
our pleasant sunday inferno
upon the crater of my volcano
your megalith compound is squared
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improvnoise
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2004-10-29 03:27:44]
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Re: approached
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:29:11 AM AEST
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This is an amazing work.The flow is beautiful.
I loved it.
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