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Field Of Dreams
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:53:14 AM in AEST
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Thats where I found you just standing there,
Feeling pain & wanting someone to care,
I held my hand out & you took hold,
You looked like youd just found a pot of gold.
You smiled at me & I smiled back at you,
You made me feel great, made me feel brand new,
I put the sparkle back into your broken heart,
I still feel that sparkle as it was right at the start.
Your eyes told me of a sad love story,
In love you had lost all your hope & glory,
I knew I was the one that you had been waiting for,
You opened up your soul & your heart began to pour.
My feelings grew for you as soon as we met,
It was a fantastic feeling one which Ill not forget,
I still get the very same feeling when I see your face,
In my heart you have the only reserved special place.
I had never before felt such a soft, tender caress,
I climbed into your eyes & began to undress,
Youre the man that I wished for upon a star,
I cant believe even now that next to me here you are.
We have been through so much in our two years,
Sharing everything from laughter to falling tears,
But I know that a love like this is built so strong,
Our passion burns bright all day & night long.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-29 11:53:14]
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:58:48 AM AEST
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'I held my hand out & you took hold,
You looked like you’d just found a pot of gold,'
Geeze those lines can easily become a great Cliche; nice, flowing poem. Great write!
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by mysticpoet on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:00:27 PM AEST
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| Very Good poem, enjoyed reading it very much--:) |
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:05:12 PM AEST
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Another beautiful heartfelt write Pixie.
This wonderful.
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:05:24 PM AEST
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Another beautiful heartfelt write Pixie.
This is wonderful.
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:38:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by pander on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 07:48:29 AM AEST
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Another 10 out of 10 for this one from me :-)
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 06:04:56 PM AEST
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Another really beautiful write that you have written! Beautiful!
Spazzo |
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:06:48 AM AEST
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| Such a pretty poem :) |
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