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i can't make you love me (revised version)
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:47:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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everytime you smile my heart beats a mile
everytime we touch i feel it's to much
everytime we talk, i feel like i can't walk
everytime i catch your gaze, your eyes look over me with a glaze
i can't make you love me i can't make you see
how special you are cause your everything to me
i can't make you want me i can't make you mine
but i can show you light at all your darkest times
everything you say to me i keep inside my heart
everyday i picture it as a brand new start
for you and me and what can be
but i relize now what seemed possible is only another attempt to be lonley
i can't make you love me i can't make you see
how special you are cause your everything to me
i can't put that twinkle in your eyes
like the stars the sparkle in the sky
i love you to much to ever let go
no matter what you do to me
my undying love will still show
i don't understand why god makes me love you
if you don't feel the same
i hope my heart will chnage it's mine or i think i'll go insane
i can't make you love me i can't make you see
how special you are cause your everything to me
but if your ever lonley
i want you to know i'll be there for you
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2004-10-29 12:47:43]
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Re: i can't make you love me (revised version)
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:54:49 PM AEST
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awww this was so very sad and moving, a real deep write from the bottom of your heart and soul,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: i can't make you love me (revised version)
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by mysticpoet on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:50:01 PM AEST
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| Unfortunately, I didn't get to read your first version, but this one is very good. I engoyed it a lot |
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Re: i can't make you love me (revised version)
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by lilracer37 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:56:41 PM AEST
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| Don't worry u havent lost ur touch, trust me it was a very good poem a whole lot better then any i have written. |
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Re: i can't make you love me (revised version)
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by falling_octember on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:40:34 PM AEST
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hey babe,
thanks for you comment on the poem.....is this why you've been so down latley.....don't be....you have no idea how beautiful you are do you? |
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