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Betray Her
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He put his thumb to her cheek,
As if to rub away her tears.
but looking at this girl, so weak
he dug it in, to bruise her here,
and kicked her to the ground.
He stabbed her several hundred times
but she wouldn't make a sound.
Even now, she trusted him, with her life.
now that she is dead and buried,
The people wonder why
She still said "i love you"
and couldn't even cry.
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2004-10-29 20:32:06]
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Re: Betray Her
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:16:48 PM AEST
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How tragic!!!!Makes me sick as I abused and beaten as a child.......and then they would say they loved me! Beat you like a dog and then they love you? I know you're relating here, as I always loved them back too!
Few words but so much meaning!! Great poem with much feeling!
Much love to you with many hugs
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Re: Betray Her
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:42:17 AM AEST
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| Sickening, and so vivid, showing trust tortured and abused, you put feeling into the poem, and painted fear, and left an empty feeling, awesome write, visual and harsh, astounding how you can capture such vivid images and feelings and put them into such a short write. |
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Re: Betray Her
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by skyblumoon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:37:03 PM AEST
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Another very sad but powerful write. Good job!
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