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You Are Beautiful When You Cry
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:50:47 AM in AEST
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I would kiss you their
Just how you are
After you’ve cried
With mascara still smeared
And not yet dry
From tears that still stream
Down your lovely face
And blood still on your lips
I would drink of you tonight
Under the eclipsing moon
And starry sky
I just find you so beautiful that way
Don’t ask me why
I could not say
I’m with out words
Like a fool hypnotized
By the sadness in you eyes
I just have to stare
You are beautiful when you cry
Looking like a fragile doll
That I would care for and
Never break
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:54:20 AM AEST
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Awesome writng as always.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:54:53 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, reminded me of a picture of someone crying with mascara running I found on the net today, awesome and visual this write was, with feelings galore, a poem I enjoyed reading thak you for sharing. |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:56:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, its hunting and sad at the same time.
Jane x |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by THORN on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:24:55 AM AEST
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"I would kiss you their"
I think you mean 'there'.
Other than that, this poem is something really special, being romantic yet freaky at the same time, I could never write something like this.
Great work,
Cheers,
-Raye |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:54:07 AM AEST
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wow, John this was amazing and dark, a true masterpiece,
pixie xx |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:28:55 AM AEST
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| This is a sweet gesture if you were to ever show this poem to the person you wrote it for. It's a good poem. |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:56:57 AM AEST
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| brilliant write. well written and full of emotion. you have outdone yourself yet again =] |
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Re: You Are Beautiful When You Cry
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by addicted2selfharm on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:56:23 PM AEST
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Wow, I still can believe that, thank you so0o much, heh. I really like it. ((((((hugs))))))
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