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Rainbow
Contributed by
THORN
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:34:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Formed by nature,
A beautiful arc,
Striped with colors,
It shines in the sky
Looked upon by the world,
Such a dazzling site,
Filled with happiness,
It shines in the sky
A pot of gold it rewards,
Guarded by a mystical creature,
Big in size,
It shines in the sky
Sadly its time is short,
The sun will shine,
For the remainder of its time,
It shines in the sky
Rainbow.
Copyright ©
THORN
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2004-10-30 03:34:39]
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Re: Rainbow
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:23:24 AM AEST
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| beautifull in its simplicity like a rainbow, I got a sense of awe and wonder in the first 3 stanza's the final stanza brought me back to earth with a reminder that all things in nature are lost to the pace of modern life |
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Re: Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:49:10 AM AEST
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Sadly we are decimating them with our smog and haze. One day they won't be able to be seen anymore. That is sad to me.
Rita |
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Re: Rainbow
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:48:48 AM AEST
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| good write. ::still looking for the one poem about a rainbow that doesnt have a pot of gold minchined:: =] |
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Re: Rainbow
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:34:45 PM AEST
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A truly beautiful piece...I'd have given it full marks also...
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net....
Jenni |
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Re: Rainbow
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by THORN on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:54:11 AM AEST
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LMAO
Well you were warned in the beginning that it touched on mythology =P
But thanks everyone anyway =)
It's one of those other request poems so I didn't spend much time on it heehee
Cheers,
-Raye |
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