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Born To Not Satisfy
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:08:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't help I'm not perfect
Haven't you realized that?
I've been defective from birth
Liable to snap
Don't snap back at me
You'll get yours someday
I'll still be around
You'll be six feet underground
That's where you should be right now
You're so miserable
You're killing yourself
Why haven't you died yet?
No one's perfect
My mom wasn't
My dad wasn't
What makes you think I'm going to be better?
Sorry, you have another thing coming
Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow
Someday soon
I wasn't born to satisfy you, only myself
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
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2004-10-30 09:08:16]
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Re: Born To Not Satisfy
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:30:40 AM AEST
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wow could really feel your anger and hate in this write,m best way to express it through writing, I have learnt that the hard way
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Born To Not Satisfy
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:08:03 AM AEST
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| I wish we all had this tatooed on us somewhere..it's great.. |
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Re: Born To Not Satisfy
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:34:50 AM AEST
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| excellent write. i felt the anger, and i liked the next to last stanza best because i never even thought of it like that. keep it up =] |
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Re: Born To Not Satisfy
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:40:41 PM AEST
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| trouble with him again |
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