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And I'd give it all away to have someone to give it all to
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:13:58 PM in AEST
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The sacrifices I made to be with you seem like nothing when I am able to look into your eyes once more.
But how far was I willing to go to be with the dead? To be the dead myself?
But for you my love this seems all to insignificant... nothing else matters to me.
It is the true test of our love put into place too soon... you died long before I could tell you this.
Therefore I die too.
We will remain together for eternity our convictions proof of the injustice of your death...
I revenge you... I take my life for you... Placed in the ground.... the only option left.
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Re: And I'd give it all away to have someone to give it all to
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by Sir_Odd on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:03:00 AM AEST
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| Wow... powerful stuff... powerful stuff... |
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Re: And I'd give it all away to have someone to give it all to
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:22:56 PM AEST
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| It gives me chills even just remembering it. It feels so real, and is so easily related to if the reader hears the same drum. |
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