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Small town Dreaming
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:59:22 PM in AEST
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A town peaceful and small
Empty street and vacant buildings
Tractors in the fields
Semi's cruzzing on the highway
Parks empty
Schools shrinking
Darkness falls
Lights flicker off and on
An owl hoots from above
Wild dogs howl from a distance
Screams and cries
Come from a burnt down abandon house
On the edge of town
A young girl appers
Sad and wanting me to follow
Afraid and unaware
I awake screaming
God it was only a dream
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2004-10-30 15:59:22]
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Re: Small town Dreaming
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:04:49 PM AEST
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LOL sounds like my community,but mines just a tad more borring,good job keep'em comen
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Re: Small town Dreaming
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by goater on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:38:47 PM AEST
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Quite a pot-pourri and would benefit from furthur expansion in order to clarify the metaphors which appear to be heavily coded, perhaps even preconsciously.
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Re: Small town Dreaming
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by Runeath on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:39:45 PM AEST
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| It's a grate poem. It sounds nothing like my town (real loud). |
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