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Taking Over Me
Contributed by
lilracer37
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:53:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The world is black.
The world is dark.
No one can start it.
Nothing can stop it.
The colors are all gone.
There is nothing left to see.
Anarchy is comming.
Nobody will be humming.
They are blind.
But me, I see.
My life is but a thing I live.
Without purpose.
Without point.
My life is but a toy to them.
A black ball of fun.
Yet fun to you,
Is pain to me.
You are bright with color.
I am black with hate.
Your colors are seeping through.
I run and I hide.
So you won't find me.
But you suffocate me.
Watching me die.
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lilracer37
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2004-10-30 20:53:52]
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Re: Taking Over Me
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:50:34 PM AEST
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It seems very sad to me. But very expressive.
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Re: Taking Over Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:19:58 AM AEST
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| Full of darkness, killing light, beautiful and visual, creating pictures vivid and clear, awesome poem, loved it. |
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