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Forgive Me
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I don't know how you love me.
You say you do, but I don't see
How you can when I'm not as lovely
As you, not as smart, not as good,
And I don't even love you as I should.
I'm not as good at poetry,
I'm not worthy enough to be
Your friend, much less anything more.
And I write, to you my heart I pour.
Why do you love me as you do?
Is it a love of pity? Or is it love true?
I can't even imagine my life without you.
It would be desolate, empty,
Without love, peace, harmony, joy.
And I am sorry, perhaps I am obsessed,
And I pleadingly ask your forgiveness.
I understand if you can't, I really would.
And I'm sorry, for I ask more than I should.
Just please forgive me,
And I will try my best to be
The person worthy of your affection
Without a backward reflection.
Copyright ©
luna_mica
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2004-10-30 23:02:29]
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:02:13 AM AEST
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| So much self doubt, imprisoning your thoughts in an iron cell of confusion, you wonder how someone can love when you dont feel that you are right, easy personality is the key, looks mean squat in alot of peoples eyes rymes you said you couldnt, then I must be blind for this poem had a flowing ryme and a cool rythem, if you arent a poet, then how did you writer this, you have a natual talent, wether you see it or not, we see it others will see it, awesome poem cool write, take care and peace be with you. |
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