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pain of a lovelorn
Contributed by
veenu
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my eyes like frightened beads,
watching others deeds,
just like that a living wire fall on me...........
still unruffled,
i furtively making this write,
so that some one listen for a while,
that how could i survive,
many weakness just approached me when she left me,
and these weakness fallen in love with me at first sight,
these weakness made my light system inactive to oppose
any strugle or any fight.
time is elapsing like sand,
making way out from my tight hand.......
just like a blind,
solving a puzzel,
a pain inside my heart muscel,
this pain want to say it was not from when i born,
but it is a pain of a lovelorn....................
plz.......stop playing games with hearts,
plz......stop hanging me and others.................
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veenu
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2004-10-30 23:28:32]
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Re: pain of a lovelorn
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:50:50 PM AEST
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| A ballad of denied emotions, and falling feelings, a cool write, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: pain of a lovelorn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:27:18 AM AEST
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very good work loved the title too.
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Re: pain of a lovelorn
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by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:55:58 AM AEST
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| I get the sense that english is your second language, right? |
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