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Lub
Contributed by
Novocane
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:25:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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this loneliness is killing me
consuming me
i cant seem to think of anything
but you
your smile
your laugh
the way you look at me
when we fight
when we're together
when we're apart
when we're alone
when we're crying
i cant bear another day
without you by my side
as i look into your eyes
i am filled with this feeling
this feeling called
love
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Novocane
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2004-10-31 03:25:02]
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Re: Lub
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:31:44 AM AEST
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Aww youre just a sweetheart, and at only 14 years old hmmm. well anyways your a good writer keep posting.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Lub
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by Sholdershy on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:58:42 AM AEST
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You are well intune with your emotional side and you are a loving person.
Excellent writing
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