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Love its just a feeling
Contributed by
loopylou
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We sit love sick
starring at the stars
holding hands and siping lemonade
silly kids
when its all just a phase...
Its all just a hallocination
a figment of your imagination
Love its just a feeling
feelings, they change
feelings, there never exactly the same
Those strs you look at
there a trick of the mind
out to get you everytime
Did you know that those stars
there dead
there old
and the sky
it looks nothing like that
ypur just looking at the past
whlist you become the past
Love, Just anouther feeling that dosent last
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2004-10-31 11:03:18]
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Re: Love its just a feeling
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by lilracer37 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:16:53 AM AEST
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| you really need to check ur spelling, they make u preview ur poem for a reason. and i have to disagree, love is not a feeling that doesnt matter, love is one of the best things in the world and its more then feelings is part of life, you just have to find the right person to share it with. |
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Re: Love its just a feeling
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:19:39 AM AEST
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love can last if you find the right person, I believe that true love never dies, maybe im just a soppy old romantic, I hope that one day you find somone who will love you forever and vice versa, good write, expressed well,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Love its just a feeling
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by Ryoko on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:22:13 AM AEST
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well i disagree with u all and i completely agree with u louise! love is great, but if ***** hurts, and it doesnt last forever, and it is only a feeling, not ur life, no one wants to be consumed by love, and if u do, u've never had it
Loved the poem louise
-Ryoko- |
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