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waiting
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:48:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look at me, see what u have you done to me
Im falling, Im drowning in eternal darkness
Forever to wait for you
To grab my hand and save me from this nightmare
Hate surrounds me and writings appear on my skin saying, I hate you
Pain is in my heart making a wall around it
I hear voices of regret in my head
And tears fall down
Im fading away, Im breaking apart
Only the pieces of my heart lay on ground
Only to wait for another day
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Re: waiting
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by lilracer37 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:06:57 PM AEST
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| its dark, and emotional but its good,sounds like someone hurt u pretty bad, been there done that, dont worry someone will come along and save the day and make everything perfect and make u feel perfect |
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Re: waiting
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:42:09 PM AEST
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A gripping piece of poetry.
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Re: waiting
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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This piece grabbed me by the balls and wouldn't let go...very emotionaly dark...I loved it
Mason |
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Re: waiting
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:46:55 PM AEST
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| very well written. |
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