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Cast Away
Contributed by
lilracer37
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:19:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All of these thought
They are adding up
All of these feelings
They are breaking down
When all is lost
I am crying a river
When all is gone
I am saying a goodbye
I am so very confused
There is no one to care
I am so very scared
There is no one to share
My hopes, my ambitions
My dreams, and my pride
Because of you
These things make me hide
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lilracer37
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2004-10-31 21:19:33]
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Re: Cast Away
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:47:26 PM AEST
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| that was good........i know how you feel soemtimes i think i have no one to talk to and i ahev no way to let things out so i get mad at let them out on other poeple don't worry things iwl get better |
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Re: Cast Away
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:33:26 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well. Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Cast Away
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:41:37 AM AEST
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beautiful and sad, very well written,
takecare
pixie xx |
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