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Not Broken
Contributed by
Starlilly
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:58:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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You try to tell me what I should do
And how I should react to you
But what you fail to realize
Is there is more to me than meets the eyes
I have many layers under this skin
Some I don't show for fear of being hurt again
But I will tell you this much
There are feelings inside you will never get to touch
If you try one more time telling me how to me
I fear what will happen because you see
Don't try to fix me for I am not broken
I just choose not to deal with you again
Copyright Renee October 31 2004
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Starlilly
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2004-10-31 23:58:50]
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Re: Not Broken
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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| I like that...telling me, how to me...good. I kept wanting to put a be in there..how to be me..then I figured out..it works without it..better. good. |
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Re: Not Broken
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:52:19 AM AEST
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| brilliant and well expressed. |
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Re: Not Broken
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:19:12 AM AEST
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| Stanch words, written well, and keep to them, noone has the right to change the way others want to feel, beautifulyl expressed poem, enjoyible reading. |
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