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Love's Tragedy
Contributed by
crash
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:11:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I sit in the funeral home
looking at your beautiful face
and I ask god
to take me from this place
The last time we talkd
we said together forever
Now it looks to me like
it's either now or never
Thoughts of your voice
bring me to tears
thinking of our life
over the years
I look at you now
all dressed in white
then i softly whisper
"see you tonight"
as I grab the blade
and feel it's bite
I finally feel calmness
within me
I can finally put an end
to our tragedy
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crash
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2004-11-01 09:11:44]
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Re: Love's Tragedy
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:23:43 AM AEST
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very tragic write, can feel your pain and desperation in this write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Love's Tragedy
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 11:14:11 AM AEST
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| what a sad poem..the first thing I read with my mornings coffee.. |
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