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GOD'S TRAINING ME
Contributed by
GODSBESTIMAGE
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:17:12 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I grew up in big church
My soul, I needed to search
My father was a Pastor
Who is my master
He has taught me all I needed to know
About God and how to grow
It was God who had me in training
And that's where I'm remaining
I've been through some very bad storms
Now my life, He transforms
I have all the faith that I need
Because I am doing his good deed
If it wasn't for God's grace
I wouldn't be in this very space
Gwendolyn Marie Barden
Copyright 2004 Gwendolyn M. Barden
Copyright ©
GODSBESTIMAGE
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2004-11-01 14:17:12]
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Re: GOD'S TRAINING ME
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by eden on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:06:37 PM AEST
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| I liked it, very cute. i would suggest a little elaboration and maybe make it rhyme every other line, but hey its great just the way it is, no need for change |
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Re: GOD'S TRAINING ME
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:12:04 AM AEST
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So Glad God is training you and I am sorry I have not been on this site when your poems are there to read....I will be now reading more of your poems...
cheers~coni |
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