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Broken Tear
Contributed by
Moca
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I need to
Regain my
Lost sight
Life is
Dark where
It was once
Bright
I need to
Find my
Own light
My Sun has
Dark clouds
In His eyes,
And even He
Cannot see
Clearly today.
And I
Don't know
Why...
Maybe I
Evoke such
Darkness
In all the
Light that
Comes near...
I came in
With a
Smile
And left
A broken
Tear...
Copyright ©
Moca
... [
2002-11-18 14:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken Tear
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:44:12 PM AEST
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Short but sweet.
Like the style
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Re: Broken Tear
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:18:38 PM AEST
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This is awesome! I can like, feel the emotion in it. I just love the line "I came in with a smile and left a broken tear"...that's a great line!!
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