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Between the Suns
Contributed by
dreampillar
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The golden light mocked me
Shone on yellow-leaved splendor
I could not bear the first sunset without your voice
I woke to your stirring this morning
You were behind every corner, in the face of every stranger
Waiting at home
Now closing my eyes, Goodnight
I can't let go your hand
In this nightmare, sunrise is too far away
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dreampillar
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2004-11-01 15:39:01]
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Re: Between the Suns
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:41:44 PM AEST
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first of all welcome to YPDC the best site on the net!! Secondly this is a beautiful poem, Ill be watching for more
Michelle |
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Re: Between the Suns
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by Clementine on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:42:08 PM AEST
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| A random effort that turned out to be a wonderful write! It's short but beautifully expressed....I look forward to reading more! |
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Re: Between the Suns
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by theMoth on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 04:55:30 PM AEST
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Welcome to chaos.
Loved the first stanza.
A good little poem.
--Mothy |
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Re: Between the Suns
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:11:23 PM AEST
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WOW !! awesome write and oh so sad!!! but i understand how you feel.. GREAT JOB!!!
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Between the Suns
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:39:46 AM AEST
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| A great first submission. Wonderfully write. I love it! |
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Re: Between the Suns
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by avanottingham on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:56:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery my dear. |
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