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Fading Away
Contributed by
KSUHO11
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fading Away
Its been so long Been so long since Ive seen your face Felt your lips pressed against my lips Your naked body entwined with mine It's as if you never come back I know I must be patient The memories seem to be all that I have Pictures, notes, and talking on the phone is whats left We try to make it work But we end up in a fight We deal with consequences Even though things have permanently changed I can feel us fading All we have become is fading away Have to fight, never give up on us We will not go quietly I love you; we will stay Lets not fade away.
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2004-11-01 20:42:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:59:16 PM AEST (User
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Good poem, hope you can work things out and not let your love fade away |
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:15:56 AM AEST (User
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awww this is sad and written beautifully. i hope that your love doesn't fade away,
takecare
pixie xx |
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